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It's the end of the line
The twist of the tracks
The open breeze of desire
Long passed me by
Left me in this place
This, dead place
Where no answers exist
Because, of course
All the questions never were asked
Instead, we just rode the rail
Not paying attention
To where they were taking us
We just rode the rail
Not caring about anything
Or anyone else
We just rode that rail
Off into some unknown sunset
Where our dreams go
To die.
Stuff.
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wordconvict Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I hate that place, "Where our dreams go to die"...
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UncleGuts Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Me too.
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McFlyky Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012   Traditional Artist
this totally represents how i feel about my job. i feel like i'm on a rail.
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UncleGuts Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I think a lot of people feel this way. Headed to some unknown place because we lost our way long ago.
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snowraven0 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Student General Artist
:c

is you okay?
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UncleGuts Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yep! :D This is just more thoughts on the way people let the world take them away from their dreams.
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snowraven0 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Okays, just making sure...
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UncleGuts Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yep! :D No I have been very good for the most part. Same old stuff, really. :) Been playing a lot of video games and accomplishing very little.. so yep I have been good! :D
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snowraven0 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Lol sounds good to me ^^ but im here for ya if you need to vent~
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UncleGuts Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yea I know. :) :hug:
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