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I can feel it tighten around my neck
Her cold eyes pierce through mine
I can smell the fresh leather
And I can feel the metal studs
Push into my flesh
I moan as I hear the clasp shut
She steps back and gazes at me

"You belong to me now"

She attaches the leash and smiles
She kisses me gently
The last sign of comfort
That I will ever have

She puts me back in my cage
I whimper as she shuts the lights off
And she walks away
She turns back and winks

"Sleep well my pet"

She turns the light off
And I am left in total darkness
I smile to myself
Because being owned
Is better then being used.
Not sure where this came from.
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merpagigglesnort Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011   Traditional Artist
o! we have to talk! ;) btw, wonderfully clean, brief, clear, bright. i really am into this! :)
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UncleGuts Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! :D
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SunburntX Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2011   General Artist
From deep inside, I imagine. Perhaps you need to look deeper still. :)
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ProfessorSkrewlews Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Good poem, the last two lines are absolutely fantastic.
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UncleGuts Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks!!
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NekoiX2 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2011  Student
The last two lines sold me.

So freakin' very true!!!
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UncleGuts Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:) Thanks!
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DorketteScribbler Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2011
Oooh, very nice.
I like the images of discomfort, pain, and apprehension in tangent with the narrator's apparent happiness.
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UncleGuts Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! :)
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DorketteScribbler Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2011
No problem! And thank you for the watch! :D
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